alright let me drop feedback on this real quick.
Where the fuck did i hear this beat before? i've heard it a few times actually. But anyways let me get into this track
The introduction is cool. basically pumped up your track. Used your chorus. Shits fire Good way to start a track. I was feelin this Introduction.
Production
The production part was pretty good. the adlibs were decent. actually good. Not off track or anything. they came in nice. the quality is pretty good. I can nod my head to it. what do you record with? your volume is alright maybe a little bit too loud. but maybe its just my headphones. The beat is cool. I heard it a few times. But i like it actually. It fit your delivery and the topic you were on. So overall production was nice on your part.
8.8/10
Vocals
Hmm. Your vocals. were nice. Nice flow i was likin the speed rapping style then switchin up and slowin down again. i like that kinda shit. The lyrics were on point. nothing i havent heard before. but it's nice bruh. Keep it up. Your Flow is nice on this joint it fits the beat and your delivery is nice aswell. It fits the track. You were on beat throughout the whole thing i don't think you fell off. Nice shit. the vocals were pretty good. i liked this. The chorus was decent. i liked it. sort of catchy
overall 8.4/10
overall nice track bruh. I can bump this a few times. nothing that'll make me like OHH DAMN let me bump this shit in my whip. but this is a nice little underground track. I like it. Nice shit
rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232717