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Old 08-07-06, 03:49 AM   #6
Journal!st
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Silver streaks through the trees, upon the leafs of the breeze
Paws pressed to the soil, claws seemingly brief and un-seen
Creep'n with ease, stealthily moving, in seek of the pleased
Rich in its reads, steps cause prints to seep in the weeds


(No Visual...It Draws Near)

Dense and present, immense, this suspenseful presence
Since the sense has lessen'd, I smell it's stench its essence
Fear drenched affection, no peers or hints direction
Sear lift I’m left with, veered in and left prints

(I See.....A Sight Worth While)

Drown the thoughts, found to shock, I’m proud in spots
Bound in dark, hound or not, brave down in locks
Coated even, such a poster that no impostor should wander
Just quietness, lone surroundings, and listen, its such an honor

(..Silence..)
^^
from there on i LOVED the piece was short yet was direct and was very blessed with nice wordings and nice evolved writing. the multies and metas were nice and very well thought of my dude

very nice overall!.
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