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Voted For: ~Luciano~
My vote is for Luciano
it was a close one but when it really came down to it...
i felt Luciano's was alot more lyrical
his flow went with his beat well
quality wasnt bad
And on Tony's track i didnt hear much lyrics
i heard the chorus more than any of tha verses
nothing in particular stood out
not bad quality aswell
i think some points where improvement could be made for Luciano would:
it seemed like you were a little rushed or were maybe forcing your rhymes a little bit, to fit with the beat maybe
so maybe slow it down and just go with it
and as far as Tony:
I think if you had come a little more lyrical it might have been closer
so next time i would say spend more time on ya verse than ya chorus
and thas wuss up
if theres anything wrong with my vote (i.e. needs a little more explanation) let me know before ya DQ my vote so i can fix it to fit requirements...
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