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Old 08-08-06, 02:57 PM   #6
J. Luth
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lol this a dachypa beat right? but beat is pretty hot..

first verse: dude's flow is pretty dope. ONly thing is, vocals way too low. Can't really hear him. but this flow is pretty tight. quality is coo, could be upped a lot th. lol but flow was ill. but I really couldn't hear verse so can't critique on much

hook: smaple dope

second verse: nice change from flow from first verse. flow coo for most part, only a few spots that were off. Lyrics pretty coo, hard to hear tho. Cuz vocals a lil low too. but other that that everything sounded coo. liked alcoholic shit

third verse: quality ehh, could be upped too. lol this guy volume good. flow is aiight. choppy in some places. lyrics coo. not bad verse overall

Overall song was pretty nice man. like the topic y'all did. was good. only thing, work on those vocal volumes yo. but good shit otherwise. 8.5/10

oh, and props for peepin' track yo. I just reuploaded the track tho with sample in iit, if you'd want that version more. just letting yo uknow. lol but props for feed, and good track yo. stay up

EZ

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