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Old 08-09-06, 12:38 AM   #8
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WTF im up against this gay?

fuck it dont wanna wait til wednesday...
^this actually rhymed..

"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote"
is what you said back in the day
What you shoulda just said was
"lookin for a new dick to stroke"
^too bad ur punch didn't. that shit was a mad gay style, set up and just all around lame punch. i mean, this was uncreative like the FUCK!

How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long
You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong
^play'd concept. and the wordin wasn't even harsh to make it fresh. should've been made more harsh for more of an effective execution.
You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first..
Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?..
.. it was better than your actual verse!
^once again, ur wording hurt you here. this could've been somethin witty with the right wordin. i see what u were goin for, but it failed with the shotty wordin. still, better than led's shit.

don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat
this kid disses me for livinstrong,
....................well damn you must be weak
^ok, this could've been a decent fed punch. like with spul, ur wordin is what killed it. not harsh, nor fresh @ all(and i've never seen it used).. so thats bad.

ok, this was a meh battle. Led Poetic barely had shit that kept me readin(and its just 1 bar) so that means, STEP YOUR SHIT UP! spul, well.. i know you can do better. for some reason i guess u felt like half assin it, but u still had enough for the win. both come more harsh and more fresh next week.

v/ Spul
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