im like fuck maddrapper
he aint ready
if so i eat his ass up like spahgetii
^^^ To basic, no vocab, no complexity, no nothing ^^^

he a loser and his rhymes iz pety
run up on him and slash em wit tha machetti
^^^ Ok but again on the above ^^^ nothing to take note of.

u dont want beef cuz ill bury u under a sheet
wen da truck stop i shoot a buckshot
^^^ No comment ^^^ but a little pointer try and make your shit
rhyme.

maddrapper yo flow aint hot
u need 2 stop
i got tha spot locked
im done wit u now im gonna point tha gun at u now

As a whole this was rubbish, u need mad elevation, check out the help threads
if you need any pointers on how to write.