Black Poet
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Scanz you have really impressed me ! I remamber when you first started here
I could see u had it in you but you still wasn't translating the right words across.
You have elevated a lost since Jan, the only thing you need to do now is step
up your vocab and got more complex. Read over Open Mics mainly from people
like I am unreal, Mr Multie, Lola, Tim, Ysdat....
Just look at how they write, the way they paint a picture of what they are writing
about giving you a vivid image of the verse. it's up to you to make the next step,..
stay up and keep writing this was dope btw.
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