He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then
N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him
kinda weak
Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear
While the directors are left saying they were following his career
ehh

N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text
Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head
weak
Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude
Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you
poorly worded
Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard
After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward
decent closer


All in all, I honestly didn't like your verse. your flow was of by like one or two words in most lines and your punches were kinda weak and played man. you got the battle thing down but you should come more complex next time.


ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on
ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on
wak... its right up there with momma jokes during a battle
stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude
man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u
good line, shouldv'e been written different but still a good line.
ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this
the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis
Ultra wak - I wish I never read this line
hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading
everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training
Wak
read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness
how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access?
ok line but really poorly worded.

Your style is decent but most of your lines just need to be reworded. you got ok concepts but you just need to know how to word em.' better.

You both def need to elevate but you did ok. Just need to work on your material and come harder next time. Keep it up and ya'll be str8

V/ Hell Yeah .... ... .. RTF in my battle with Oz.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..