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Old 08-09-06, 01:03 PM   #8
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--Hell Yeah--

He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then
N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him
>>Really stretched. Also, why would sperm review him? Bad opener.

Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear
While the directors are left saying they were following his career
>>You had the concept but very poor delivery.


N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text
Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head
>>Kind of watered down, but okay.

Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude
Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you
>>Delivery is atrocious. Not a very hard hit.

Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard
After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward
>>Okay closer.



--Image--

ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on
ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on
>>Really bad opener.

stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude
man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u
>>Concept is there but wording is off.

ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this
the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis
>>This was pretty horrible.

hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading
everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training
>>No...

read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness
how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access?
>>Bad nameplay.


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Hell Yeah




BARELY. Neither really had lines that I dug. The delivery needs to be brushed up by both parts but HY clinched it.
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