I didn't think either came great but Wyte came very basic, especially with the 2nd line. I mean it was a nice attempt and all but I've seen that whole style a hundred times. Artistik's first punch was ok but the wording let him down. The second punch again was worded poorly and didn't really connect.

I'm gonna give this to Artistik just for being more inventive with his concepts. Both need to improve, but it's much easier to improve wording than to find good concepts.

V/ Artistik