tornado and xplict are some good nu-bs and if they keep it up they'll go far in the game.

this was good. better then that last drop. but u can do pretty good storys, here u just spittin. try tellin us a lil bit bout ur life. problems loves. etc. like i sometimes do.. it may catch the readers attention. try checkin out my piece " a body with no soul" ull see wut i mean

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