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Old 08-09-06, 11:30 PM   #11
Lampejo
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the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
^^good wordplay... wording was a lil off but still hit good

wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
^^wording could have been better, but still conected

vs.

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
^^meh this is played like whoa, and your wording was meh

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
^^you could have made this nice but your wording ruined it.

vote: artistik becae hes sex-c and his punches was worded better

wyte... work on your wording
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