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I don't lose
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the new kid on the block eh? i aint gon talk about the other people your second right.....
you sound a lil seperated from the beat, like you wrote that rap for something else n tried to make it work....it was a choppy flow at best.....needs work...but hey thats why your in OY to elevate....but on the positives you got a good voice and a lil swagger on the mic....so you could make it work if you just upped a lil shit.....oh n the third verse was corney with tha dude/girl voice overs.....eh
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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