okay..typing as I listen...not feeling beat...sounds very comperized an overly generic...whoever spit first...wasn't feeling his flow, his delivery was koo lyrically club oriented nothing to fret over...ok 2nd verse flow is better goes wit beat but the delivery is blan as hell...no emotion whatsoever...hook...wasn't feeling you need to layer it more an it needed a distinct catch phrase with a track of this nature hook is EVERYTHING!!!an yall missed it here...2nd verse is same as first..one dude had the delivery, one had the flow...I ono man I feel you most on introspective shit limited...club shit jus doesn't seem to be you ya kno what I'm saying.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233115

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