k..typing as I listen...beat is corny lol but works with what u spitting bout...okay back to old dubless calam, delivery wise you on point...I can tell coming from a real place...hook is tight, can tell momma had you on the choir lol. flow is on point jus held same one too long in verse 1, verse 2 same thing good flow but its unchanging...delivery still on point...this beat an subject really befits you tho...this is borderline christian rap...if you made a rap video...I see you spitting to ya family in church while they watch from the pews...but this is real son an u hit the nail on the head where you needed it most which was emotion. I feel where you comign from son, def can relate to what you saying...an thats the key to making hit songs....establishing some type of connection with the listener an you did it hear. Keep it up man, smoothe introspective shit is where you shien fo real....1

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