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Old 08-10-06, 10:16 PM   #6
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they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth

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^^^ face it bitch, its obvious that whole post was of shit...
yeh you got your shit up early...but sent us all back to sleep because of it!
fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with
I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country

tied on quotables.

Butler - your verse was consistent. You had some stand outs which i quoted and the rest were decent. But dont diss a stretched structure with a line thats stretched itself. It defeats the purpose and makes you like bad.
Slic - Your opener was dope.. but it seemed like you fell off. A lot of mediocre lines that had bad wording or the punch was just wack. The phew concept wouldve been hot but you stretched it out and worded it badly. You started to heat up at the end but your closer was horrid.

In the end I felt Butler was more consistent so he gets the win.

v/ Butler
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