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Old 08-11-06, 12:21 AM   #3
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat i kinda like it really
first guy flow is ok he sounds like juvenile kinda with his delivery flow was cool kinda old though
hook is kinda boring rhyme scheme extremely predictable
2nd guy hate ur verse lyrics are gay rhymes scheme same sotry
not feeling the uh parts delivery you dont sound confident
3rd i like yours the best probably with the4 exception of the quality
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