okay beat is amateurish sounding...ok first verse tony ya flow is real choppy an robotic sounding... I can tell you are stretching ya syables to make ya rhyme word hit on the snare...but it really kills your rhythm...delivery wasn't bad but coulda been better...lyrics was koo...verse 2...yvonne...flow is smoother...its still a bit choppy...delivery is good...its mellow but still has a emotion behind it...lyrics are koo, corny lol but good...flow you holding too long...that def needed to hop off the A/B flow after the 8th bar. verse 3 ok tony...same as verse 1 same flow an delivery same feed applies...overall this wasn't bad...quality coulda been better beat was a tad loud...an vocals coulda been eqed better but all in all its a decent track jus could use some polish....1

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