1st verse was pretty decent, there's a slight echo on your vocals that I didn't like, but other than that it was a straight verse, not too much that stood out to me.

hook is ok, progresses the track

too much time between the verses

2nd verse was more entertaining as far as the presentation goes, it grasps your attention, Again the echo is annoying. I definately paid more attention to the second verse more than the first, even if the song as a whole isn't really something I'd listen to.