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Old 08-11-06, 11:50 PM   #28
Van Ished
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returning some feed.

Your flow is good, and presence is there but it could be better, the volume levels are different between the hook and your verses, it makes you sound quiet. Quality is good, but also could step up on your vocals.

Ca'lam's verse is good as well, strong flow and presence all throughout. His quality has a lot more clarity.

The only real problem is the fact that your hook is louder than your verses are.
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