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Old 08-12-06, 04:49 AM   #11
iamthatdude87
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beats aight....decent....aight tony comes in u need a lil more mic presence flows a bit choppy aight yvonn flows cool voice is different...lyrics is cool u need more swagger get into it...you sound monotone.kinda repitive.word...never do that check shit lol it sounded gay fo real...flows smoother than the first tho delivery is a lil better ya the third verse was the best out the song ....overall its cool kinda chill jus needs some rerecording the verses n shit n it be str8 =1=.
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