lol.....Tony's SC pic looks like Terrell Owens.

Anyway, Your quality sucks man....lol. I mean, you got clear vocals, but you gotta do more than just record on a nice mic and mixdown. Try to compress a little or use Hard Limiting cause you got loud spots, then you got some soft spots and they are all in there together. Use some Dubs now and again too....

But for the actual verse, flow was alright, but you kinda fell off at times. Your delivery sucked too....lol. Punches weren't really that great either man....just wasn't feeling this one man....

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