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Old 08-13-06, 02:34 PM   #8
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ima destroy ya whole rep, so like restartin races i'll send you back at start
punch hits so hard that Int's whole face gonna be disfigured like you was abstract art
^that shit was aiight.. but stretched like the fuck. could'a used better wordin as well.

vs.

And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
^^this was a dope concept and could have been better with better wording. work on wording shit so u can execute it more properly.
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash
^this was aiight, i just quoted cause it had more wit than ya other barz.

both were aiight. i feel that flow just had some better ideas than flash. both have shotty wordin they need to work on and both could work on coming more fresh and ALOT less play'd.. nawmeanz? word.

v/ Flow Intell
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