The Epitome Of Greatness
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"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote"
is what you said back in the day
What you shoulda just said was
"lookin for a new dick to stroke"
^^Personally i dont like the style but im not gonna vote based on that, the personal was ok but besides that this bar was average
don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat
this kid disses me for livinstrong,
....................well damn you must be weak
^^this was subpar as well, if you worded it differently i woulda liked it more but it was also just average
Overall: 4.5/10
SPuL:
How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long
You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong
^^ok personal in the setup, kinda played how you worded it but the meta in the 2nd line was dope. i like that.
You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first..
Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?..
.. it was better than your actual verse!
^^another ok personal, like led it coulda been worded a bit better but overall it was ok
Overall: 6.5/10
Vote: SPuL
I felt he won this battle with the livestrong punch it was a good meta and the setup to it was decent.
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