Originally Posted by Indeph

The structure was pretty good. The wordplay was ok. It was pretty witty to add the suspense into it by placing the long pause, and belittling his value by simplifying the diss. Also insinuating weakness subliminally by stating it's easy to make him fall was a major blow to his manhood since his physical stability can make or break his pride. I'll give it a 9/10. Good shit.