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Old 08-13-06, 06:40 PM   #15
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DNGRX:

Hate how I judge, untill you saw what your honour wrote
You have a Soul of a Fighter... stomping on your throat
^^this was weak IMO.. the setup was elementary and the punch was just ehh, coulda been worded better

D explain things?See, I have a habit of puttin' dudes in place
& if you want to know what's behind my name....it'll be euthanize
^^that didnt even rhyme... Euthanize is pronounced. (U-Tha-Nize).. how does that ryme with dudes in place. This fucked up your chances of winning


Overall: 2.5/10


Euthanize:

that whack punchline? now i'm serioulsy not playing any games
cuz it looks like tha Alphabets had an accident, & fell over into your name.
^^humorous.. coulda been better but still decent

it's a shame, don't start none. there won't be no trouble
D tha 1st rapper to get his name from
some1 who couldn't spell 'n a crossword puzzle.
^^this woulda been so much better if the 2nd line wasnt stretched. Syllable count is way off, that killed your punch here


Overall: 4/10


Vote: Euthanize..

I think both peoples second punch was weak but Euthanize won this one with his first punch
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