this beat is ight, hook is okay, should be more catchy, the first dude fell off maybe once or twice, but overall he was pretty much on beat, your flow is nice, on point, lyrics need work, but then again u were just fuckin around so its cool. stay up, drop some serious shit so i can judge your skills better.

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Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns