Listen'n like the openin intro...

Beat is ok...

1st: Cant really hear u my dude u sound muffled...Flow is a lil choppy...lyrics cool lacked emotion...delivery was okay

HOoK: I didnt like...man i dont know it lacked emotion that raw shit..feel me.? all though i liked the dog barking in the background that was dope

2nd: was a lil better than the first...it sounded clear...delivery was better to me it started to sound like u was gettin that confidence...

HOok: Same

3rd: Balances it out..yo for real...u came off better on this one not enough energy on the other 2...but good shit..

Over-all
Dog it coulda bin mixed better an beat turned down some..if not turn the beat down then turn the vocals up it woulda sounded a lot better..hook was weak but energy was crazy....ive' heard better shit from u before...but other than that i dont see anything else wrong...keep it up kid hope to see more drops from u....my ratin 4.5/10 holla back..1

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