View Single Post
Old 08-14-06, 04:08 PM   #5
Shear Kaughn
Broke as hell
 
Shear Kaughn's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,276
From: Tenn-EZ
IP:

i like the beat...its pretty cool...

intro is aight...could of been a little more hyped but other then that it was nice....
your flow and structure seems like it could of had some my syllables or words in it or something to fill up the bars....nahmean?
your delivery is alright...pretty cool i think....you had some nice disses in there

6/10 overall......just work on those things and you'll be on ya way man
__________________
Hello everyone
  Reply With Quote