yo man u should post ya link in ya thread....juss FYI.... but man not a bad club banger...beat is dope.......hook get's it done....

1st MC - got a choppy flow..........but it's on beat.......ya quality needs to be upped...but ya got a couple funny lines in there..

Hook- get's job done

2nd MC - got better flow than first........vocals need to be EQed...not bad feelin this verse more than the first...

Hook - see above

3rd MC - best on tha track...flow is strate...delivery is nice too.....only thing i can say is up quality but ya got the essentials down....

pz

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*a betrayed metaphore*

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