Listen'n.....Beats ok
coulda bin turned up a lil

1st: Not bad kid nice presence kinda laid back u know on some mike shinota type shit...very deep nice delivery, good emotion...100%

HOok: Didnt like all that much u lacked a lil emotion but the concept was good...lyrics was cool...

2nd: my pens my friend just a metaphor dope son like that shit...writters block is a bitch lol.....but u came off better on this verse but the lyrics aint compare to the first verse son wit out a doubt...but good shit i like'd this track...

Over-all
I c nuttin wrong wit it...not much i can see that was done wrong wit the mixing' over-all great job homie on the mixin' 100% for most part.. there were some parts u lacked emotion on the delivery..but thats a bitch to grasp at times i know how that is cuz i have the same problem at times...but good track dog good concept like' the topic u touched on good shit keep doin what u do holla back 1

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