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Old 08-15-06, 01:40 PM   #11
I Am Unreal.
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Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do

^ that was bad. poor punch with choppy flow

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water

^alright.. not really funny but ok..

your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man

^ haha, made me smile.. alright punch with mediocre metaphor

C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times

^ why would you use his poor concepts a dozen times?

vote/// NRG for slightly harder punches and wittier wordplay.
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