1st MC - has like no emotion wut so ever.......flow is on point thoe........quality wise u could bring up ur vocals a bit....juss up ya delivery man.........

2nd MC - Better lyrics, delivery is nice..........feelin ya flow man.......quality is nice.......overall pretty good verse....

3rd MC - Nice delivery...ya flow is on point.......lyrics is strate....lol at da "oscar meyer" line......

4th - ahhaah sounds like a white snoop.....flow's on and off........gets back on towards the end......but lacks delivery and emotion like 1st MC....


aiite then...Rtf if ya could: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473

pz

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