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Old 08-16-06, 11:07 PM   #7
Aeral
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Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
ehh.
get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
this came out too plain for me man
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
lol, pretty decent, even though it sounds pretty gay
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
lol, decent
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
funny.. but i seen a couple of those lines used on him
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
ehh
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
this was pretty dope
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
nahman.. this was wack
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
this was okay.. coulda been worded better, in your first line you shoulda said biased instead of sides again, idk.. but that woulda worked better for me.

Vs.

i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
ehhh
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
lmao. funny
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
decent wordplay
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
decent use of cliche, i felt it.
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
dopeness
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
ehh, kinda weak nameplay.. i saw alot of those urmom things at the cyph this week
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
once again.. same as before
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
decent
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
kinda stretched, but i sorta liked it. sorta

v- untold. he had harder lines, and more lines that i felt. that sex line piece was butter.
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