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Old 08-16-06, 11:19 PM   #8
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--urmomsuxdixxx--

Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
>>Okay opener - could have been better.

get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
>>Really bland.

ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
>>I've seen this type of line before - and I still don't like it.

or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
>>I like...

I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
>>Ha.

Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
>>I think it could have hit a lot harder but I like the concept.

Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
>>Sick.

His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
>>Don't like...

I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
>>A bit redundant and could have hit a lot harder but not bad.



--Untold--

i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
>>Nah, I don't like this.

if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
>>Nice.

urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
>>I think it could have hit harder but good.

ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
>>Once again, it's a good concept but not hitting too hard.

plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
>>Sick.

you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
>>Too predictable.

plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
>>Not bad... but not really that good.

ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
>>Okay.

i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
>>A tad forced but not bad.



Vote: Untold
I think both verses were pretty even - it really came down to urmom's sketch line and Untold's sex one. I think the sex one just edged it. Other than that, both verses were equal.
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