I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props <<<< NICE

addin fire to your insults cause thats the only way this bitch haz a diss <<< FORCED

i wasn't feeling your verse man, tthe lines above are the best and worse part of it though.. idk, some of your punches came off as too plane and didnt hit hard at all.

Vs.

Go head, Shiver & Quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know, Even your pet agree like Triple H <<< NIce Wordplay with the pedagree
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ? << hard personal
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash << Cool Nameplay

v/ Flow, easy vote. harder verse, with harder punches and more consistent ones also.