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Old 08-17-06, 12:55 PM   #17
Black Dragon
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tha beat is sick.........

1st MC - quality could be better...bring up da vocals........flow is crazy.....lyrics are nice....only thing i can say when doin quick tongue is to work on pronunciation.....but otha than that it wuz fiya....
2nd MC- delivery is strate, quality is nice...flow a lil choppy but ya get back on beat....nice lil story verse....
3rd MC - nice delivery, could bring ya vocals down a lil bit...flow wuz strate......

Overall - track wuz nice.....but in my opinion i wuz feelin 1st MC's verse the most......decent track....keep droppen......

pz

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