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Old 08-17-06, 05:36 PM   #9
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Played wordplay and forced wording, so itll be easy to beat him
but ur punches are a highlight,
......... only cuz without em we couldnt read em

this was worded horribly...pretty much by like one letter too..if you would have changed couldnt..to..woudnt...it would have been a lot better.and even than theres ways you could have made it better..good concept though

You aint no gangsta <---------really it’s true, no one even likes you
^Ya u can TAKE shots – but that’s enough – ur already drunk dude

i'm drunk 90% of the time i'm on here..so what?

This win will be my first here, hell nah I don’t need any luck
This wont be over until the fat lady sings…
…And were still waiting for his girl to show up

best i've seen from you so far


We know he's really a fan, and no one thinks that this dude be sick
U needa get off my dick, u bring new meanin to a GroupE bitch


i liked it..best punch of the battle

pretty weak battle..i do think teamone came harder here than you did last week
..and i see potential...i also liked his closer more than anything in this battle
Vote - Team One
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