Fucking 20 line battles...why?

urmomsuxxx
Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
Didn't like this name play punch
get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
good punch but the first line spoiled it for me.
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
weak
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
ehhh
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Good name play
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
another good punch
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
sounds like a dr. sues rhyme but it ok.
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
3 decent nameplays in one verse. ok.
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
good punch with a nice set up.

Your verse had decent average flow and shit. Some of your punches were kind of weak and seemsed like you were going for quantity over quality man. You hit good with the name plays but I thought those were your most strong points.

Untold
i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
Good punch and nice set...but it didn't really rhyme
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
could have been worded better but ok.
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
Nice punch
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
good punch but worded wrong i think
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
I think this is one of the best lines so far in the battle
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
weak nameplay punch
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
losing hypeness..this was bad...
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
ok punch
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
Good punch...Even better since you havent used it on me...lol

This was an ok battle...Only a few quotablez. Both came ok but I thought the battle shouldn't have gone 20 lines but w/e. My vote goes to Untold for more consistant punches. He also had the best punches in the battle which really won it for me. please RTF in my battle with PP2.

v/Untold

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