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Old 08-17-06, 09:56 PM   #15
Triple_N
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typing as I listen....ok damn para comes right now...ok flow is better still choppy tho...ya still stretching ya syllables to hit on the snare...delivery was better but still on the monotone side....lyrics was koo nothign spectacular

verse 2...enygma coming wit the enyg speedy flow...flow is koo...aint really blowing me away but its on beat...it has a few shaky spots as well...delivery was kinda blan tho...I ono what it is but everytime I peep u ya delivery jus doesn't draw me in...lyrically had good amount of multies...more of a style over substance verse.

Verse 3...ok came in a lil awkward...flow is on snare but not liking its rhythm with this beat...halfway thru, second half of verse flow gets on point better...sounds alot smoother....delivery was koo...best delivery on track....lyrics again nothign jumps out at me but decent...good drop.
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