listening through ATH M40 fs's

beat i heard a jillion times before. you should ease up on the reverb on your vocals it's a little too high. your flow gets lumpy, some of the punches in the first verse were ight and some just fell flat. the hook was ok, not busted but not like WOW either and the qual on it sucked. second verse was better than the first as far as lyrical content, still no bars that had me like "OH WOW" or dyin laughin or anything, just "heh, ok". For a song called Bars of Death I'd expect some more raw animal shit.


real talk as always.

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*used 2 big rmx*

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