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Old 08-18-06, 09:50 AM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
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I'm bringing concrete evidence that this kid isn't blazing
And I'll beat K Solo he leaves imprints in pavements
Unfortunately K isn't K Solo, this would be okay if he was. Otherwise, its just played wordplay

2 to 1, whats going on ah fuck it im leaving him dead
so explain how you sandwhich my punch and im STILL taking the bread.
cool wordplay, I liked this

I ent ghosting or boasting but my shit drives kids manic
and im not talking about who you were menna battle, but this wins automatic
automatic shit is played n' even if it wasn't, this was more of a statement than punch

No one's ever herd of ewe....s'how you're coming so sheepishly
And I'll even bet the farm to show this faggot isn't beating me
I used a bet the farm line about a month ago... umm, the setup to this was nice, but the punchline just left me hanging and ended with something too simple. There just wasn't that element of surprise to it.

Enygma, if you'd have used the no one's ever herd of ewe in the punchline and switched the concept a bit on the last line, you woulda won cuz this was close, K left the door wide open with a weak 2nd punch, but his 1st was the line of the battle so I got him with this.

Vote - K
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