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Old 08-18-06, 04:22 PM   #11
DaTrusHurtz
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Originally Posted by Erel Avent
Kempo just for the record, I always wait til saturday night to vote & comcast went down til like...NOW, due to this gay ass midwest storm. Turn on your weather channel, im not lyin.

I dont want an L, BOO!

You prolly would lost anyway had Kempo voted You had a good verse tho, you should join the 1-2 league, we need more good heads in it. Anyway...

your lines are wack, to this league you'll never be a hero
Oz is opening his own crew
.. & it only cost 9.95 a month to be a part of netzero
So take this as a schoolin, ya style needs to switch
the votes I stay seein after U .. just check out ya keyboard bitch

vs.

Nothing

Oz, ya came really weak here. You just had lots of weak comparisons really. Like saying he'll be screamin'... so what? Not much of a diss, ya know what I mean? Try working on being more direct with the disses and bein' more witty. Stretch out that creative side of you. Erel, you didn't come that great, verse looked very half-assed. The netzero shit i've seen a few times, but you prolly executed it the best i seen it. Keyboard line was okay, rest was enough to get this.

Vote - Erel
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