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Old 08-19-06, 12:47 PM   #19
Acuity
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beat feels a lil amateur to me. its coo nonetheless...news report works well tito, ur flowis so unique, u handle this very nicely, mixdown is v.nice 2 me,dat bouleder - rolling over sectin sounds heavy,overdubs mixed nicely, content is a lil played, but u handle message well..SOLID VERSE.....hoook is nice, well worked, fight the man cud have done wid some more energy....enygma, ouch, mixdown quality and settings immediately different, a lil too much reverb on dubs, soundin like u rapping metre away from mic, wid some sort of tings/ tint on vocals, wat mic u got?. altho im unsure if its urmic or some sort of delay on ur vocals..flow n lyrics r str8 tho... tony u mixed a lil under the beat, makes slightly hard 2 hear bits..flow is perfect, unique style, solid verse bar the mixing...hook now? liking the unique structure of track...Q, ur mix blends a lil better with tito's, eq a lil Thick sounding, not feeling flow all too much, its all on beat etc, jus not feeling, u bar tony have the better delivery on the track, u end ur lines in some strange places, lyrics probably best on track, cudda done with some better structuring imo...hook has defo grown on me..outro is placed slightly wrongly, but gd idea.

yall shud all send raw vocals to one person, that way compression etc will be same on everyones ish...cos the varying quality jus sounds silly, and doesnt do justice to the level of rapping on the track...also if sum1 has a wack mic, tell em to get a better one !! lol ..jokes...

gd track needs some quality and mixdown polishing b4 chuckin it on the whoeva's projects its 4...

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