Above Originality
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ok this was somewhat an enjoyable but somehting in this was telling me you forced some of your lines to try and fit in....i mean you did GOOD dont get me wrong but it feels like you just through sentences in without thinking about em sometimes but this made me think and made me enjoy my time reading it, its worth the read..... so nice up's on it my dude!...
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Chryme Syndicate
-Chalkin' Up Your Future
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