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Old 08-21-06, 02:26 AM   #4
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The Devil loves to dance.

... that blue eyed baby
Jesus opens his palms wide
To catch that sultry kiss
From a passing whore.

The two dance in circles

Faster! Faster! Faster!

Waltzing crop circles into
Mommy's spine, they dance
On the eighth octave of
Of a frantic mother's scream!

Her tears trample muddy skies
Before taking pace along
The Mississippi gorge,
And pouring shattered
Hearts in the key hole
Of Pandora's box.

This child is a shining star;
In the center of the 9th gate...
Run little one, we've
Got hell to raise.

^^
loved this part....really really nice emotion atti also your content was AMAZING man i liked this piece very well due to the fact that you mad everything mesh and blend and nothing forced in any means what so ever ya know...you had it going good and you never stopped!.

RTF on the link in my sig please myself
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