Sup Valor

I liked this bar:
sweating, get used to it while we throw darts at your head
tormenting your life like the others, except it's you instead

I thought it was pretty dope, had to read it a few times coz
it was like dam !! mainly this bit,...
while corpses swim up to your ankles from the lava
pulling you in deeper, as the skin melts but not your soul
they Fein for new flesh, to play with for ever
don't worry Danny you don't grow old, it never gets cold
Sick !!

And the close well your in hell kid sorry to alarm you !! dope.

This was a really good read dope word play, stay up V

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