maybe you should go leave some more feedback.
you have a rhyme scheme that flows but it doesnt sound all that smooth
and your rhyem scheme could be upped a little bit
2nd guy gotta a grimey typa voice liking your flow better lyrics too you could upp your emotion a little bit though
3rd guy almost osund like triple n and apexx mix lol i like your the verse best so far flow is off a little bit though lol at sucking on myu oscar meyer you jsut ruined it for me : /
omg you sound like my boy quizy but your lyrics arent really that nice flow isnt all that smooth
track was pretty cool nothing id download but its cool

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