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Whats Hot:The Beat

Whats Good:n/a

Whats Ok:your voice

Whats Off:Your flow is off a little bit
You gotta just let it all come out...dont hold anything back just rap it line for line like you read a book man........thats how easy it is..it'll come with time tho

Whats Wack:the quality

Overall this track is not very well put together you gotta up your emotion and pressense cuz I cant even sense your on the mic and dont even remember anything your sayin and its like a big blurr you know....it'll come with time..we were all at this level at one time..some people it comes too and some people it dont.....just keep on rapping and practicing....

5.5/10
-past tense

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