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Old 08-21-06, 06:13 PM   #4
Past Tense
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I like this beat of course you already know

its FIYA SON

alright for the breakdown

Whats Hot:The Beat of course
The flow change-ups

Whats Good:The pressense/emotion

Whats Ok:the mixing and the flow

You def. have gotten better everytime i listen your song
This is pretty solid

Whats Off:The hook is off a little bit you gotta make people know what your talkin about....

Whats Wack:nothin

Overall:this shits ok its more of a mixtape typa track.....ur def. gettin better tho a lil while longer and u'll be gettin better just keep doing it man..u'll get it...this is an ok song......just switch up the hook a lil bit......6.2/10

keep it up

-Past Tense aka PT
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